Needs more of the pencil, and it needs to be more
It wasn't really as funny as the other Pencilmations... I love the Pencilmations; great concept, hilarious, and it looks good altogether. But this one wasn't quite so good. The pencil didn't do much at all, and the characters were stereotypes... Also, if you are going to do color, try having a colored pencil come it to do it.
An outstanding work. It could easily be the start to a 90+ minute movie, and it would be a really good one. Incredible, just incredible.
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